One day the rains oboe fish lived in the deep sea. The other fish asked to play but he glided past.
One day the little blue fish sald can I have a scale he said "no who do you think you are". The rainbow fish was lonely. dan the rainbow fish gave the blue fish a scale. Then he had friends.
I like the way you used the words 'glided past'. It tells us exactly what the rainbow Fish did when the Little Blue Fish asked hi for a scale.
ReplyDeleteWell done Exodus. I like how you used speech marks when Rainbow fish was talking.
ReplyDeletehi Exodus I like your fish because it is colourful
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