Immersion Assembly
today at pt England school the whole school went to the hall for a Immersion Assembly it took for near an 1 hour team 1 went first and then team 2 team 3 team 4 team 5 went the in the start it was so cool because you had to watch Mr Burt was dancing with a song that Mr Jackson sang team 1 we cool but 2 two was even cool because there dance move and team three was alright team 4 was the seconded best team five was on the top of my list the best dancer it was mis tua and in team five it was miss moala
Fakalofa lahi atu Exodus! I agree with you, I thought team 5 was the best - they used the whole stage, all had the similar costumes & they had stage presences .. which meant, they enjoyed what they were doing! I wonder if you were keen to choreograph a dance for our class?
ReplyDeleteExodus, see if you're able to proof-read & edit your work. Start with capital letters at the beginning of each sentence, names of people. See if you can use a full stop & commas. Keep writing!