When i grow up i want to be

When I grow up, I want to be... When i grow up i want to be a youtuber and have a good family and follow my dream i will want to be picked as a nba all star because i love to be half of the person as Kobe Bryant be a goat and be in the Lakers team if i was picked i will want my number zero because i just like it. I would love to stay with my friends if we all went to the same college but only Bronson Narjari and I think Jordan and the rest of them are going to the same college as me. After i get picked i will love to fly over to Australia and then get picked but if i don’t i just want to go everywhere i have not been to in my whole life i will love to make a clan because it's fun when your young and then you will be with your friends be cool just having your friends over when yous are only 22 because its fun u can drive have cool stuff because when you are a kid it's boring you not allowed your friends to sleep only family that's all good with your friends family but just think if your best friend was your bother that will be so cool but the only thing sad is when u are growing up your mum and dad may be passing away when i am 35 but i believe my mum and dad can make it through when i am 35.

Year 5&6 camp writing.

Year 5/6 Camp - Writing 

WALT: write in paragraphs.

Introduction Hook the reader in, and let them know what your writing is going to be about.

Last week on the 11 of march most of the year five and six went to camp. This year was the 30th year of camp Mr Burt and the teachers helped us do some cool stuff. It goes on from Wednesday to Friday. It was held on the top field.

Paragraph 1 What is camp? Who, When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do? Where do you sleep? How long is the camp etc...

Camp if you don't go home have a good adventure most of the year five and six went to camp .

Paragraph 2 Highlight One - What was one of your highlights? E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert

One of my highlights was the pools on Friday and slip n slide.

Paragraph 3 Highlight One - What was one of your highlights? E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert

The best thing on camp was kayaking slip n slide desert and the pools because kayaking is cool because last year i never went single i was always with narjari slip n slide because it was the funniest thing ever and the pools because  it was a hot day that Friday.

Paragraph 4 Thank you. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Parent Helpers, Teachers, and Leaders etc

Thank you Mr Burt for the camp and the kayak thanks for the food slip n slide thanks again for everything you did for year 5 and 6.

Conclusion What did you learn about yourself in camp, why would you recommend that every student does this in future?

What i learnt about camp was  how to kayak.

Paste your finished and edited writing here/  

Last week on the 11th of march most of the year five and sixes went to camp. This year was the 30th year of camp. Mr Burt and the teachers helped us do some cool stuff. The camp goes from Wednesday to Friday and It was held on the top field. Camp is you don't go home have a good adventure most of the year five and six went to camp. One of my highlights was the pools on Friday and slip n slide The best thing on camp was kayaking slip n slide desert and the pools because kayaking is cool because last year i never went single i was always with narjari slip n slide because it was the funniest thing ever and the pools because  it was an hot day that Friday. Thank you Mr Burt for the camp and the kayak thanks for the food slip n slide thanks again for everything you did for year 5 and 6. What I learnt about camp was how to kayak to the green arrow and back.

Camp thank you letter

Camp Tūmanako

Three things i'm looking on camp

1 is the pools because on Friday it's going to be a hot day

2 slip n slide because i want to try new things like i have never did before games that we do in team 4 block because that's my favourite thing to do at camp

3 to ride the skateboarding and table tennis.

2 goals

my goals is to be good boy and to let my team win.