Year 5&6 camp writing.

Year 5/6 Camp - Writing 

WALT: write in paragraphs.

Introduction Hook the reader in, and let them know what your writing is going to be about.

Last week on the 11 of march most of the year five and six went to camp. This year was the 30th year of camp Mr Burt and the teachers helped us do some cool stuff. It goes on from Wednesday to Friday. It was held on the top field.

Paragraph 1 What is camp? Who, When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do? Where do you sleep? How long is the camp etc...

Camp if you don't go home have a good adventure most of the year five and six went to camp .

Paragraph 2 Highlight One - What was one of your highlights? E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert

One of my highlights was the pools on Friday and slip n slide.

Paragraph 3 Highlight One - What was one of your highlights? E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert

The best thing on camp was kayaking slip n slide desert and the pools because kayaking is cool because last year i never went single i was always with narjari slip n slide because it was the funniest thing ever and the pools because  it was a hot day that Friday.

Paragraph 4 Thank you. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Parent Helpers, Teachers, and Leaders etc

Thank you Mr Burt for the camp and the kayak thanks for the food slip n slide thanks again for everything you did for year 5 and 6.

Conclusion What did you learn about yourself in camp, why would you recommend that every student does this in future?

What i learnt about camp was  how to kayak.

Paste your finished and edited writing here/  

Last week on the 11th of march most of the year five and sixes went to camp. This year was the 30th year of camp. Mr Burt and the teachers helped us do some cool stuff. The camp goes from Wednesday to Friday and It was held on the top field. Camp is you don't go home have a good adventure most of the year five and six went to camp. One of my highlights was the pools on Friday and slip n slide The best thing on camp was kayaking slip n slide desert and the pools because kayaking is cool because last year i never went single i was always with narjari slip n slide because it was the funniest thing ever and the pools because  it was an hot day that Friday. Thank you Mr Burt for the camp and the kayak thanks for the food slip n slide thanks again for everything you did for year 5 and 6. What I learnt about camp was how to kayak to the green arrow and back.